Allys’ diary – episode 1
2102 September 5th
I smelled it from far, their strong fiery stench could be smelled from 1 kilometer away! They appeared from behind trees and from under shrubs… Their red scales glistening with sweat…While some of us fought them off, others, like me, stuffed as many leaves, mushrooms, pine needles and twigs into our woven baskets as we could Then, we ran.
2102 September 6th
Things are not looking good. Storm winds have come and it smells of snow…
We lost a person in the night for uncertain reasons. He just disappeared…
We also started the Crisp fire at 10:40 AM
We lit the Crisp fire and are working on the canopy above the high fire… Hunter Precie-Vakie went with his crew to find fresh meat…Let’s hope they return.
We made a large portion of soup for everyone and Kilie discovered a blueberry bush near the fence… At least something went right today… I also walked down to West Q of the fenced area and found out that part of our security borders are damaged for some strange reason…. This is a problem because after this happened something could have gotten in… Or gotten out…
Madrid, a kitchen maid, said that Lara, a girl whom her best friend’s cousin knew, has gone mad after coming very close to the meteor…
Lara’s madness was reported and she was immediately taken into therapy… Just in-case it has something to do with the meteor we fenced out the area forbidding anybody to go near it… Let’s hope the meteor has nothing to do with Lara’s Madness…
Storm clouds are hurling around the pine forest causing pines to fall over houses
2102 September 8th
A mist has risen across the Boularand pine forest…
2102 September 9th
A strange silence has crept over Boularand pine forest and The Fenced Area…
Hi everyone! Please leave a comment below, I would love to hear your thoughts on my writing! :)
I love how much the story pulls you in and really hope for a second part! I could see the pines and the “RedScales” searching for a weak place in the fence.
Thank you so much! Yes the RedScales are actually a very big preditor and have a very high level of intelligence ( and mortality rate!) Luckily they only live in the deepest of pine forests! Part two is coming soon!
Exciting story and you left us with a cliffhanger :) You’re really good at painting pictures in my mind with your writing style!
Thank you so much Simon, I love writing :)